TargetProcess View/Edit Concepts UX | Targetprocess - Visual management software

We are working on new View/Edit functionality in TargetProcess and are in the middle of UX phase. There are 2 concepts created already and we need your feedback.

What do you like? What you don't like? Do you have any suggestions or ideas? Do you think that this is a complete disaster and current View/Edit functionality is the best? Share your opinions!

Concepts are available at

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